Katsuko's Justu

[Katsuko Uzumaki]

[atrb=border,0,true][atrb=width,440px, true][atrb=style, background: url(http://i1114.photobucket.com/albums/k535/Sasuke1419/Revelation/texture2.png); opacity: 0.5; padding: 10px; -moz-border-radius: 5px; -webkit-border-radius: 5px; border-radius: 10px; border: #7e1511solid 2px;] Jutsu D - Rank C - Rank Name: Lightning Transfer (Raitoningu tensō) Element: Lightning (Raiton) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Jutsu Prerequisites: Metal Wire, Lightning Chakra, Good Chakra Control Range: Mid Range Description: The user first must touch metal wire, Katsuko usually using wire attached to kunai which he throws about. By sending lightning chakra through the wires he can damage damage the enemy with small/faint burn marks if they were to just touch it. However, if the Kunai was used to throw and ensnare the enemy like a Rope Dart, they would most likely be electrocuted. The user must have a hand on the wire in order to send lightning chakra to it. Another way it can be used is if the user manages to wrap the opponent in the wire, this makes it a good tool for torturing if needs be. Name: Binding Chains (Baindochēn) Element: N/A Type: Fuinjutsu Rank: C Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseal, Sealing Formula, Scrolls With Metal Chains Inside Range: Short Description: The user starts by quickly running around the opponent. As the user runs around the opponent they open a scroll which has a sealing formula on it, by touching the scroll the user will suddenly unleash chains, after circling the target twice the user will then activate the handseal. Once the handseal is made the chains will quickly wrap around the target tightly and the user will have to put their hand on the chains, preferably in front of the target. Once they place their palm on the chains a sealing formula will appear and the chains will be sealed tightly around the target, capturing them. A strong enough C rank or above could break the chains. Because the setting up process takes a while it is possible that the target could stop the jutsu from happening or even dodge. Name: Static Shock (Seidenki shokku) Element: Lightning (Raiton) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: C Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals, Lightning Chakra Range: Mid Range Description: The user first does the needed handseals, then sends an invisible wave of lightning at the target. The only part visible is what looks to be a ring of electricity. The wave doesn't do physical damage, instead it hinders the targets speech, makes their hair stand up and frizz, and makes them disoriented. The target will only be disoriented for two posts as the other effects will only last one post. Name: Ninja Art: Lightning Kunai Formation (Ninja āto: Raitoningukunai no keisei) Element: Lightning (Raiton) Type: Ninjutsu, Barrier Ninjutsu Rank: C Jutsu Prerequisites: Handseals, Kunai With Chakra Infused Tags/Metal Wires/Chains, Lightning Chakra, Good Chakra Control Range: Mid Range Description: Four kunai each with a special tag on them must be placed around to create a square. These kunai also have wire/chains linked to them so the four kunai will be linked together. After doing the few handseals the tags will release lightning chakra. The chakra will create a thin wall of electricity which will electrocute anything that tries to go through it. The kunai act as the conductors which keep the electricity going. The barrier can be broken by a C rank wind technique or higher, and any capable ninjutsu B Rank or higher. Once one wall is broken the whole barrier is destroyed. Breaking the ground where one of the kunai are will also destroy the barrier. B - Rank Name: Speed Seal: Release (Supīdoshīru: Rirīsu) Element: Lightning (Raiton) Type: Fuinjutsu Rank: B Jutsu Prerequisites: The seal on Katsuko's chest/neck, Lightning Chakra, Good Chakra Control Range: Short Description: The user must store lightning chakra into the seal on their body for a day. After doing so, the user sometime after can active the seal. When activating the seal the stored lighting chakra is released into the user's body. The suddenly boost quickens the user's speed quite beyond their level. How Long The Seal Works For: Genin - 1 Post Chuunin/Jounin - 2 Posts Kage - 3 Posts A - Rank S - Rank

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[Mason]

Elemental Seal:

Sealing Jutsu: Fire Seal is a B rank, and not with the ability to actually "absorb" the jutsu. It also takes a large amount of sealing formulas to just trap fire jutsus, each element would need to be on a separate scroll. If it was to actually absorb an oncoming justu, it would be and S rank, due to Sealing Jutsu: Fire Seal's Rank and ability.


Steel Tornado:

This is a tactic to use with the blades, not an actual jutsu. This is not needed.


KAPOW!:

Again, more of a tactic with a kick and Teleportaition Jutsu.


Anti FIRE Barrier:

Just moisture in the air wouldnt be able to but out any Fire style jutsu, and wouldn't stretch ten feet for a C rank. A thick dome of water around the user would be good for defense against Fire Jutsus however.


Small Barrier Wall:

You either need need a special ability to set them up, or a means to expel or contain the chakra in a said area (example here), but just creating a barrier out of thin air is no good without one of those two abilities.


Water Prison: Drainage Barrier:

Don't really see the point in this with normal water prison jutsu being much more effective, but if you have a purpose for it, ok.


Speed Seal: Release:

This would not increase his speed, only give him more chakra in an emergency. Also, excellent chakra control would be a Jutsu Prerequisite. It would also be A Rank since this is basically Yin Seal: Release without the healing effects.

[Katsuko Uzumaki]

Okay I have gotten rid of all of those jutsu except Speed Seal: Release, which was changed into a Raiton technique. So these are ready to be reviewed...

[Mason]

Body Flicker (Teleportation Jutsu) is a general skill, which the Generic Sealing will be added now.

Lightning Transfer:
The lighting chakra wouldnt stay for long at all if there wasnt a constant supply of chakra. To make the jutsu itself more effective and easier to use, I would use Lightning-infused Chakra Tags (Which can be made in the weapon requests). That way, you wouldnt need to keep charging them and the Tag could have a formula to release the Chakra when the wire/chain is touched.

Binding Chains:
This looks good to me~

Static Shock:
You can honestly cut out the static part and just make it a pulse. The idea I was saying before in the cbox was it looking like firing a blast towards the target that was invisible except for the look of a ring of Heat Haze. Just to be clear, its not actually heat haze, but it looks like a concentrated ring of it. Also, this is just an idea.

Lightning Style: Battle Encampment:
I would call it Ninja Art: Lightning Kunai Formation to emphasis its deference between Ninja Art: Four Flames Formation. Also, breaking the ground near the kunai to dislodge them could also cancel out the jutsu.

Speed Seal: Release:
1 Post for Genin
2 Posts for Chunin and Jonin
3 for Kage

[Katsuko Uzumaki]

All changes made.

[Mason]

Ok looks good~ I'm also going ask to change "speeds speech" to "hinders speech", since messing with the electric wavelengths of the brain like this would automatically hinder, not enhance

[Katsuko Uzumaki]

Edited.

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Lighting infused chakra tags will be B rank when you create them because chakra enhanced weapons and such are B rank. Just remember that.

Your speed seal needs one small thing. State that the speed jutsu boosts your characters speed to one letter rank higher speed than what your character already is. Meaning if he is a chunin his speed will equal that of a jonin, etc.

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[Mason]

Changing back to 1/2

Name: Lightning Transfer (Raitoningu tensō)
Element: Lightning (Raiton)
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Jutsu Prerequisites: Metal Wire/Chains, Lightning Chakra, Good Chakra Control, Lightning-Infused Chakra Tags
Range: Mid Range
Description: The user first must touch metal wire/chains, Katsuko usually using wire/chains attached to kunai which he throws around to set up the battle field. Each kunai have lightning-infused chakra tags which activate when something touches the wires/chains, shocking them. The damage done can leave small/faint burn marks and if someone were to hold on to the wire/chains, it would most likely electrocute them.

Another way it can be used is if the user manages to wrap the opponent in the wire/chains, this makes it a good tool for torturing if needs be.

The skill needed to set up the wires correctly is at least A, not C. You will also need kunai to use this, and since you cannot attach kunai to and throw metal chains, ninja wire is the only option. I thought "Lightning Transference" was when you bound the target in Ninja wire and focused the electricity in your hand to have it travel down the wire to the enemy.

[Katsuko Uzumaki]

I highly disagree with this and this is why. Sasuke used wires and fire jutsu combos and those were C ranked. Along with that things like Manipulated Shuriken is D-Rank and Manipulating Attack Blades are C-Rank. Katsuko is not even manipulating the weapons but throwing them around.... Which would make the area... It is not hard to throw kunai hooked to wires everywhere...

With that part aside there is also the factor of how powerful the jutsu is.... All it does is cause faint/small burns... Where as an A-Rank like Chidori can impale someone and a B-Rank like False Darkness can pierce through rock.

I am also not a fan of taking back approvals unless it's a GOOD reason that is major. This was a complete downer after it took so long to get two approvals to have one taken away like that.

[Mason]

Your not understanding, anyone can throw kunai with wires, but it figure out exactly where each kunai should be thrown, at what angle, and how to do it while fighting an opponent is very difficult. You cant compare jutsus just use Ninja Wire to this (which also MANIPULATING ATTACK BLADES use Chakra Threads, not ninja wire).

Ranks are not only based on how deadly they are, but also on how difficult they are to use. This also highly restricts your opponents movement, making it much easier to hit them with powerful attacks.

And about the approval being taken away; look, we are just starting out. We are all still trying to get the hang of everything and we will not let something that should be changed go by just because we overlooked it on accedent. All the other jutsus are accepted, apart from the one that needs changing.

[Katsuko Uzumaki]

.....Edited.

[Mason]

The only thing Im going to change is making Lightning Transference a bit more "Shocking" xD (increase the power a bit without increasing Rank)

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