Yoru Uchiha Custom Jutsu

[Noctis]

.	YORU's JUTSU Amaterasu Tsukuyomi

NAME | Susanoo
ELEMENT | Chakra
TYPE | Ninjutsu, Dojutsu
RANK | S
JUTSU PREREQUISITES | Mangekyo Sharingan
RANGE | All Ranged
DESCRIPTION | Susanoo can said to be the strongest technique for every Mangekyo Sharingan user, and for a member of Uchiha to activate the Susanoo is a rarity. The Mangekyo Sharingan must have the abilities of Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi awakened to access Susanoo. The Susanoo goes through several different forms, which Yoru can switch between at will or even leave in a state between forms.

Earliest form · This is the simplest offensive and defensive technique of Susanoo, which will only manifest some of Susanoo's skeleton. The ribcage is generally manifest first, which provides a good defense, but still can be fractured or even melted. An arm can also be formed, which is connected to the ribcage. It is also possible to utilize one of Susanoo's weapons using the arm. When first forming, Susanoo manifests around Yoru like an aura.

Incomplete form · As Yoru gains additional control, musculature and skin begins to appear atop of its bones, which progressively complete the full skeletal structure. It is only when Susanoo's growth is fully matured and thus, the user is completely surrounded, and the vulnerabilities of the skeletal form finally eliminated. However, Susanoo can also appear behind Yoru, instead of just surrounding Yoru.

Complete form · Susanoo develops into a complete warrior-like form, where its skin, armour and final arsenal of weapons are manifested in their entirety. In this form, it can anchor Yoru to the ground, preventing opponents from forcibly moving them unless they can get through Susanoo's various layers.

Final form · In the final form, this fully humanoid shape is further surrounded by a secondary layer of armour and provides a better defense than previous forms.

These are the forms of the Susanoo listed above. Each Mangekyo Sharingan user has different Susanoo and its abilities. The aura color of every Susanoo is different too, Yoru's Susanoo is blue in color of aura. For Yoru's Susanoo, it wields a bow which can shoot far away and has the power to destroy one or two buildings easily. The appearance of Yoru's final form Susanoo is given below.

Final Form Susanoo

NAME | Wind Release: (Futon: Bakuhatsu Tatsumaki)
ELEMENT | Wind
TYPE | Ninjutsu
RANK | C
JUTSU PREREQUISITES | Hand Seals, 10 Explosion Tags
RANGE | Short Ranged
DESCRIPTION | After Yoru performs the hand seals, a large tornado will appear and surrounds the target. At the moment, Yoru throws some explosion tags into the tornado and the tornado will explode.

NAME | Wind Release: Explosive Tornado (Futon: Bakuhatsu Tatsumaki)
ELEMENT | Wind
TYPE | Ninjutsu, Kayakujutsu
RANK | C
JUTSU PREREQUISITES | Hand Seals, 10 Explosion Tags
RANGE | Short Ranged
DESCRIPTION | After Yoru performs the hand seals, a large tornado will appear and surrounds the target. At the moment, Yoru throws some explosion tags into the tornado and the tornado will explode.

NAME | Sharingan: Burning Pain (Sharingan: Nensho no Itami)
ELEMENT | Fire
TYPE | Genjutsu, Dojutsu
RANK | C
JUTSU PREREQUISITES | Sharingan
RANGE | Short Ranged
DESCRIPTION | The target fall into the illusion of Yoru's Sharingan. What the target will see in the illusion is a colorless world with black flame around. The target is unable to move in the illusion and the black fire will burn on the target, giving the target the pain of burning, for one minute. This technique can only be used when the target is looking at Yoru's Sharingan.

NAME | Slash of Moon Fang (Getsuga no Surasshu)
ELEMENT | Chakra
TYPE | Kenjutsu
RANK | C
JUTSU PREREQUISITES | Melee Weapon
RANGE | Long Ranged
DESCRIPTION | Yoru swings the falchion with his chakra attached on it, and generates a condensed chakra arc flying towards the target. When the chakra arc hit the target or a solid objects, it will explode. The explode is not very powerful, but able to push the target back a few feet.

NAME | Wind Flame Aura Sphere (Kaze Kaen no Oragan)
ELEMENT | Wind and Fire
TYPE | Ninjutsu
RANK | C
JUTSU PREREQUISITES | Hand Seals
RANGE | Short Ranged
DESCRIPTION | An offensive and defensive technique for Yoru by creating a wind flaming big sphere surround himself in the sphere for 10 seconds. This technique can only be used when the target, or multiple targets are going to perform melee attack.

NAME | Explosion Distraction (Bakuhatsu Fuchui)
ELEMENT | Chakra
TYPE | Kenjutsu, Shurikenjutsu, Kayakujutsu
RANK | C
JUTSU PREREQUISITES | Melee Weapon, 1 Kunai, 1 Explosion Tag
RANGE | Melee
DESCRIPTION | Yoru throws a kunai with an explosion tag attached on it towards the target. The purpose of throwing an explosive kunai is not to attack, but distract the target. At the moment when the kunai explodes, Yoru teleports to the target's back and perform a slash attack.

UNAVAILABLE
NAME | Mangekyo Sharingan: Fake (Mangekyo Sharingan: Nise)
ELEMENT | Chakra
TYPE | Genjutsu, Dojutsu
RANK | S
JUTSU PREREQUISITES | Mangekyo Sharingan
RANGE | Self
DESCRIPTION | The Mangekyo Sharingan grants Yoru the ability of intangibility, allows him to walk or pass through any solid objects. Using this ability, Yoru can dodge most attacks, or hiding in a solid. He is able to walk or pass through human bodies too, but his eyes require physical contact with the target.

[Mason]

I like what I see ^_^ just a few things.....

Chakra would not be an element, just say "None"

For "Sharingan: Burning Pain"; you should put "Eye Contact" in the jutsu prerequisites since it is needed to preform the jutsu.

For "Wind Flame Aura Sphere; can you describe this "wind flaming big sphere" in a bit more detail?

For "Explosion Distraction"; this is more of a strategy than a jutsu. Since anyone can utilize strategies, this is unnecessary.

For "Mangekyo Sharingan": Fake; this is a bit iffy because it sounds very identical to a less powerful Kaumi. It also would not be a "Genjutsu" since it dose not affect the user's or opponent's senses.